Published June 5, 2005
I wrote this days ago.. I wrote this in my religion notebook. I don't like the way I wrote it now I found it back, but I do like the topic. 
This is stupid.. I just wanted to post this because I don't think I will or maybe want to see it again. *trows religion notebook in the barbage and rip the page off* Here... My writing skill weren't that good by then.. maybe they're still the same but I do feel improvement in myself... 
There:
*sighs* *trows the riped off page in the garbade* Yup work here is done!
Xia
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Its a little hard to read because of the bright yellow font on a white and purple page, but I like the idea of posting it in handwriteing, it makes it seam more.. I dont know... Real, maybe.
cool i do that except i draw cartoon zombies and that on my jotter oh also i like drawing eyes.BUt apart from that good
it seemed trite to me...really trite...but I can't help you out, so I'm a turd for telling you that, sorry. Do better, because you can.
i liked it i thought it was cool
Heh, that made me laugh... was it supposed to?
Anyway, it was a bit cheesy because of the rhyming and such, but it was light-hearted (I think) so the cheesiness didn't hurt the poem too much.
The background?? That's my ripped off page out of my religion note book.. I'm sorry if the letters are a bit unclear to you... And the color it's the best I could have found... (my favorite too)
There.. Xia.. Thx for reading, viewing and replying!
I liked it a lot. How did you get the background?